This is my favorite of all of your poems : )
it's shows that you really care and spend time thinking about the state of the world around you. Very good thing. The flow was also wonderful and the refrain of the line "the world has no desire" added a nice touch. Great piece : )

5/5<3

Very good actually makes me sit back and then about all this time
really really good
and thanx for the comment.
lol idk if you've seen a pic of me
but ill put it up later so u can see
i will FCK somebody up

Oh this was a cool concept. You do make a good point. I like the flow and rhyming. It was litle bit more jumpy than the other ones Ive seen by you but its still always on topic so its not a problem at all.

Take care XD

"Bleeding.
They keep watching.
Misery.
They laugh at me."

i agree, this was an interesting concept. i could see this becoming a very deep rap song LOL (that i'd actually like, i hate most rap) but because the rhyming was great, the writing was emotional, somewhat rebellious and overall you made a really great point.