by Sourav
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Nice. So romantic and sweet! Good way of expressing love! Enjoyable! |
by Deana
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Very sensual,without being crude.excellent write Ingrid. Not to many people can write about sexuality and still keep it romantic. great work. |
by Blueleo
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Very nice poems, very passionate. It was hot and spicy, yet tender and soft. My heart was lost between comfort and being turned on lol. An exciting read indeed. |
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Very good poem! : ) |
by Sorinity
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Wonderful job! i love the abc rhyming pattern, not seen very much. great to see a poet go somewhere new :D cant wait to read more, keep it up |
by Mizuki
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I like this very muchs! |
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Again a very nice warm and sensual poem, you come through with a lot of wanting and need in this poem, even a sense of longing? |