"Pearly mistress, guide me home
To my castle by the sea
Blessed, these miles that I roam
Neath your shining mystery."
An absolutely beautiful write, and this stanza especially was breathtaking and created such a scene. Good work, your poem perfectly describes the midnight moon. 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever.....
I deeply appreciate you kind words, Cindy and Breaking Dawn. Wrote this one after a
long walk at night. The full moon and illuminated clouds inspired me. Have been making a conscious effort to put rhyme and meter in my latest poems.
The moon has always inspired me. Its reminder to me that there is more than our planet. But of course the moon inspires much more and that is clear from this piece of poetry. Your rhyme is indeed gracefully acomplished.