Comments : Midnight Moon

  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "Pearly mistress, guide me home
    To my castle by the sea
    Blessed, these miles that I roam
    Neath your shining mystery."

    An absolutely beautiful write, and this stanza especially was breathtaking and created such a scene. Good work, your poem perfectly describes the midnight moon. 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever.....

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    You did a wonderful job on this piece. The imagery is great.

    Pearly mistress, guide me home
    To my castle by the sea
    Blessed, these miles that I roam
    Neath your shining mystery.

    This stanza painted a beautiful picture for the readers mind.

    From the fires in my heart
    With rhyming verse, I honor thee
    Before the morning makes its start
    Thou blazing orb of poetry.

    Great ending. I really like how you refer to the moom as a blazing orb of poetry.
    Keep up the good work.
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    I deeply appreciate you kind words, Cindy and Breaking Dawn. Wrote this one after a
    long walk at night. The full moon and illuminated clouds inspired me. Have been making a conscious effort to put rhyme and meter in my latest poems.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    Loved everything about this piece !
    The imagery was spectacular and the wording brilliant.
    The ending tied it up in a pretty little package.

    Excellent read
    Luanne

  • 11 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thank you for your kind words, Luanne. Glad you liked my moon tribute.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    Congratulations on your winning poem. Excellent front page material and very deserving of praise.

    Excellent writing!

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win :)
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    I am deeply honored and appreciative to receive this award for my lunar poem, and am very happy to be in the company of so many wonderful poets here!

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This really is a beautiful piece of rhyming poetry which I absolutely love. There aren't many poets who still write poems like this with such accomplished grace.
    All the very best,
    Ben

  • 4 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    The moon has always inspired me. Its reminder to me that there is more than our planet. But of course the moon inspires much more and that is clear from this piece of poetry. Your rhyme is indeed gracefully acomplished.

    Take care,

    Michael