My right One

by Paperdollsletters   Sep 20, 2008


Once there was a girl
Who was longing for a touch
Who was longing for love..

Then he meet those eyes
Making her weak inside..

She felt something different
Her heart found it's home
She can't stop what she feel..

She's falling in love with that guy
Whose eyes is the light of her soul
Whose voice make her comfortable
Whose smile make her feel secure
and whose presence make her complete..

Now tell me what to do
i can't stop this feeling for you
I now find the right one
but I wasn't close to be his right..

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  • 14 years ago

    by Half Husband Half father

    Awesome poem 5/5 loved it

  • 15 years ago

    by maya raphael

    I realli like this :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Kuro

    Then he meet those eyes

    ^i think you meant MET instead of MEET^

    She can't stop what she feel
    ^i think you should add an S at the end so it reads: "She can't stop what she feels"

    She's falling in love with that guy
    Whose eyes is the light of her soul
    Whose voice make her comfortable
    Whose smile make her feel secure
    and whose presence make her complete..
    ^this was my favorite part. the rhyme really impressed me, ^

    thanks for sharing
    ~Kuro

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Wow! So wonderful! keep it up 5/5

    ^_^

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