I love this poem. Good advices about how to keep a relationship going.
I especially loved the lines:
"Never give up on your love,
And hold on to what you are feeling in your heart.
For a love that is sincere, and strong,
Will be held together, no matter how far you are apart."
And â€œDo not let the seeds of jealousy,
Begin growing deep inside your heart.
Because if you let this happen without good cause,
Your relationship will surely be doomed to fall apart.â€
5/5, beautifully written. The whole poem was beautifully written.. Keep it up..
Im so touch w/ this piece! im actually affected about the message coz i had also love someone so far away from me. so this poem is really great, for me it really has a great dedication. though its kinda long but very meaningful and enjoyable. most of all i've learned alots w/this great piece!!! i love it keep it up 5/5
I really really loved it.. its a very encourging poem..
what i loved the most is the way u showed
how it might be really hard to have that kind of relationship
but on the other hand, the love between
two people should be stronger than the distance.. very good job ^^