• 11 years ago

    by Heba

    OH WOW.What a nice piece.It was really wonderful and amazing,I truly loved it.But don't worry sis may allah let you go back to him and stay together for ever.

    Nice poem and really lovely.5\5...

  • 11 years ago

    by Amena

    I love this poem. Good advices about how to keep a relationship going.
    I especially loved the lines:
    "Never give up on your love,
    And hold on to what you are feeling in your heart.
    For a love that is sincere, and strong,
    Will be held together, no matter how far you are apart."

    And “Do not let the seeds of jealousy,
    Begin growing deep inside your heart.
    Because if you let this happen without good cause,
    Your relationship will surely be doomed to fall apart.”

    5/5, beautifully written. The whole poem was beautifully written.. Keep it up..

  • 11 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Im so touch w/ this piece! im actually affected about the message coz i had also love someone so far away from me. so this poem is really great, for me it really has a great dedication. though its kinda long but very meaningful and enjoyable. most of all i've learned alots w/this great piece!!! i love it keep it up 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Amazing work,, you encourage loyalty, honesty, peace, respect etc; all through love :)

  • 11 years ago

    by sarah

    I really really loved it.. its a very encourging poem..
    what i loved the most is the way u showed
    how it might be really hard to have that kind of relationship
    but on the other hand, the love between
    two people should be stronger than the distance.. very good job ^^

  • 11 years ago

    by PoEtiCmYme

    Wow im jealous ..great the emotions ..if was heartwarming...

  • 11 years ago

    by Dado

    can this poem make me cry any much more
    looooooooooooved it
    added to ma favs
    keep it up please

  • 11 years ago

    by NeverSayForever

    I love some one far away but i know he no longer loves me as much. Anyway amazing poem. I know how you feel. It is hard. 5/5.x

  • 11 years ago

    by Emily

    Beautiful. I can relate. Thanks for the encouragment. (:

  • 11 years ago

    by Melody

    Unfortunately not always long distance relationship works out, and sometimes jealousy is reasonable...
    Nice poem, keep it up!5/5