Comments : Last Moments

  • 15 years ago

    by david hollas

    Nice writing

  • Lovely poem!
    I liked the force of it from the beggining. although the end does fade a little... it didn't have as much as an impact as the beggining, but other than that your choice of words was wwonderful!

  • 15 years ago

    by Nia Warfeld

    Wow... very poweful...But very nice.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nia Warfeld

    Wow... very poweful...But very nice.