I like this poem good job!

Aww! this is such a cute poem! i looooove it!

Aww...!! very very sweet. I love it too!!!

Amazingly beautiful keep it up

Awwwwwww this poem is sooo sweettt it almost made me cry hunnie but whoever this poem is about should be lucky to have someone like u to love them and care about them

Your girlfriend is really lucky to have a guy like you care for her that much...this poem was beautiful! :)

This poem was awesome..sweet..and really cute..
i liked this poem a lot..
really shows how much u love ur girl. :)
keep it up. :D

This was a nice read. very sweet.

btw: i think you might want to change "YOUR" to "YOU'RE"

Nicely written with true emotions i really enjoyed reading this

How cute its so good

I loved reading your poem! It was so real and honest. your girlfriend is lucky!
5/5

Gah i love that poem... she must be a really wonderful girl and shes very lucky to have someone like you...

Such a lovely poem, 5/5. Em

Okay, 1) you are such a sweet person for writing something like this. 2) your word choice is perfect for this kind of poem. I enjoyed how you made everything one line. You chose a theme and stuck with it. :) Definitely awesome! I'm jealous of the lucky girl who gets this poem dedicated to her! 5/5!