"Someday, true love, on thee, I'll shower
Like the morning breeze through the lilac flowers"

Nice simile here, fits perfectly. Great poem, excellent wording and you kept me reading and interested with your words. Also, there was so much emotion portrayed in this lovely piece, so great work! Keep writing, always and forever....

Thank you, again, Breaking Dawn for your kind comments. I take walks at a very nice tranquil park near my home and I get lots of poetic inspiration there.

Wow.Wow.Wow. Gentleman, im adding u to my favorites list.