Yuor My Everything

by Justin Albert   Sep 27, 2008


MM OK here is one right off the top of my head

there is nothing i can do but say.. i love you
i try my best in every way to prove to you

that i love you and everything is alright
everything is i fall asleep thinking about you

and i wake up thinking about you
in my dreams you are everything

when i am awake you are everything
without you i am nothing
P.S. i still have no title for this so can you reply with a good title for this poem?
[THIS WAS A FREESTYLE POEM FOR MY GIRL FRIEND]

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  • 14 years ago

    by katie

    Ok... comment. 1 how long have you been wrighting? reply. 2 make it easy to know what is you comment and what is you poem it can be harder for the reader. i like the poem im just saying there is some work you can to to improve in 10 fold.

    love and peace
    katie