Aw this is so sad!!

As I lay here and inhail my last breath
As my body goes cold and I stare at death
I still love you more than my words can say
Have a great life and a very nice day.

^^very great closing. amazing and intense write...

Ok you just love making your readers cry! lol j/k.

and it is a very sad poem...
princess emmi is right the last stanza was simply perfection. it ended the whole poem with a very sad note, it just made the biggesst impact overall...

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

Wow, this one is just so...wow, full of wanting and desperation. very sad, made me cry