"Your choices are fate,
Life determined and set,
Time can only tell your future,"

These lines really caught my eye, I love the way you worded this, so flawless..

"Your soul entrapped in this lost world,
silently screaming out to be let free."

Wow, two lines that completely speak for themselves. You really had me wanting more by the end, and this piece was so captivating, it really had me entranced. Beautiful work, you have so much talent, just by this one poem I can tell, take care. Keep writing, always and forever...

This one is awsome

Wow! the words amazing. nice job !

This poem was good, I noticed that you do all freestyle, I do the same as well.

I enjoyed the poem, but felt that it was just getting good and then you ended it. An idea, perhaps when you list a word you can describe it.

Family, that which has my moral and mortal bonds
Friends, Are but the same people who will judge you
Lifestyle, is how you're judged from the pearly whites

Amazing :)