Corrupting My Thoughts

Honestly Not the best poem youve written although you probably reconize this It feels forced in parts not as much emotion that you normaly put into it, Maybe you got bored and wrote a poem? Im not trying to offend you

But a part I do like is the contrast of Past and future, A commonly used compare and contrast in poems but normaly they feel forced but that was the most flowing part of your poem, Good luck Hey first comment O.o