Comments : Looking Within

  • 17 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Wow. what a twist. i love it. awesome job. this was well written.
    --aprilsconspiracy

  • 17 years ago

    by Andy

    Thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by Splashley

    I absolutly love it, it is very well written...voted you 5/5. (:
    <333
    ashley ♥

  • 17 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wow, very powerful ending and your words created such a sad scene in my mind. Nice job though, your descriptions were great and made me feel what you were feeling. Take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...