U always write such magical poems =)
beautifully worded. xo

Adel
What a wonderful touching poem. It is so good to be reading your words again on your acct :)
You did a great job on this one.
~Clapping~
Cindy

This piece is worded so wisely. and it's very meaningful. so beautifully written with a fantastic flow indeed. i was mesmerized.

Bleed me the rivers
bliss in the wounded stream
sunlit water in the wells
the next echo of my dreams
and bleed me the stars
gust in the moonlit beams

that stanza was lovely, i liked it the most out of all of them. the words you speak of are so pure and deep. especially beautiful. a great write, keep writing! job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

This poem really hooked my up, with the twist of it's rhymes and the meaning, it's one of the best I'd ever read. ^^,

5/5

OO WOW ! DAMN THIS IS A GOOD POEM!

Very good write. words were beautifully arranged. 5/5

Deep and meaningful. You are a master of the metaphors, that's for sure. A clever arrangement, catchy rhythm and flow and the rhyming isn't forced. I truely admire the fact that you use the English language so beautifully and it isn't your first language. You continue to paint pictures with your vivid imagery. Excellent job!