Comments : No father should be like you

  • 15 years ago

    by Cody Jo as you no

    WOW did these things happen to you or someone you no???

  • 15 years ago

    by Im Just Me

    DATZ DEEP

  • 15 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Wow that's so sad..... very well written tho.

  • 15 years ago

    by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life

    It had me crying till the end....so sad and upsetting. i can't belive that our own blood could hurt us as much as they do...

    You're poem like the others are deep. so much hatred and anger only you know how to convey. didn't have any rhyming in it but i think that's what made a bigger impact, real...
    Keep writting i look foward to reading all your poems!

    **Ada**
    *ABSwaBHiaPL*

  • 15 years ago

    by sezz

    This one is amazing, you capture all the emotions so well, so sad but one you cant stop readin. 5/5