I can not think of a more good way to describe or mention somone liek this !!!

the last stanza was the ONE for me !!!

great work

Beautiful.. I guess this was about lesthat I never met him because I just recently joined.
But Btw I loved Played/Gatorade very original.
Anyway it seems like everyone here had him close to his heart and i feel like I missed out on something I hope you feel better about it sooner or later

Beautiful poem i really enjoyed reading it............keep it up

Simply amazing...
Very moving.
I don't want to use too many words for something so pure...

This poem is Feeling.

Jen,

the whole poem is written well and the final stanza really brings with it the enormity of horror.

Take care

Michael