Wow i love the way this was written...it's long but it's still really good!!!
great job 5/5

Very touching i loved it !!!!! keep it up and u no u should just live ur life to the fullest dont worry if u are in a relationship just take care of u and only u and in time u will find the perfect person that is right for u

I love the twist!!
it's perfect. the way you we're so happy to be with that person and then, BAM, happiness gone. so awful, some people don't give a damn who they hurt, and sometimes they end up hurting a wonderful person...
beautiful poem! nothing should be Changed!

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

Yet another amazing piece, so sad, so full of emotion. love it