If you really loved him you would use l o v e not l u v but thats just me and welcome to best-love-poems.com.

ME! :) lol 5/5 good work!

This is a really cute love poem, but I think you use "you" to much. "luv" should be "love" and in my opinion, I think you could add a lot more to make the poem better and extend it. Otherwise than that this was a short but nice piece. Take care, 4/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...