The imagery certainly drew me in and held my attention along with the diction. It had a slight dream-like atmosphere as I was going through it. The mention of Luna and Orion was a nice touch. Really can't pinpoint anything wrong with this piece.
~Faith-less

Very beautiful! Your imagery is top notch... Always a pleasure reading your poems...

Thank you all very much for your kind comments. Glad you liked my poem, inspired by a moonlit walk I took in the early morning hours. I prefer the night because there is something so enchanting and mystical about it.

That is so true, the night is very enchanting. I loved the imagery that passes my mind when I read throught this, it touches my heart so much. Very captivating and entranching as your description took me to a land beyond. I also liked how you wrote "pearly moonbeams", very unique and beautiful. Take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever....

Thank you for your kind words Breaking Dawn abd Snowryter. I love sharing these words from my heart here!