Comments : Saying bye

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    I loved every word of this piece! very heartfelt yet sad. but so beautiful in my eyes. the part about it being 3 years i can sort of relate because this poem reminded me of my first love and it's been 3 years since we were together, and i must say i feel the exact same way, you said just how i'm feeling. but all and all i loved this piece, very creative, you can make your words come to life and keep the reader wanting more. job well done. 5/5.


  • 15 years ago

    by Liz

    Goodness. idk why i didn't read this sooner. i havent been reading or writing much either. but this really brought me to tears, honey. i miss all your poems! i was shocked to see them gone. and now this . . . this is probably the most heartbreaking thing ive read from you. and i still loved it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    Dora that was just...heart-wrenching !!
    I loved it from beginning to the end.
    Although there were some cliche words here.
    but still didn't lessen the beauty of the piece..

    Running a thousand miles just to see you at the end
    But you're not even there you're not even my friend

    this was just soooo teary...writing this piece...I can imagine you cried a lot while & after finishing it.

    My heart is with you babe
    Write on I'm sure writing is one of the best ways to release the pain =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Aaah another cool poem by u..,..its deep and it can be completely imagined..feels like a 5/5 for u^^

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    OMG, this is so sad but beautifully written with lots of inspirational words. Perfectly flawless, 5/5. Em