Wow....reading this gave me the chills. Great word choices and vivid imagery really drew me into this poem.
Awesome!
Take care
Cindy

Wow this is amazing, wish i could right like that... the flow was great, and I really love the story you told great job... 5/5

"The words I spoke, a twisted lie,
To draw you to me in reply,
A plan to cleanse myself of sorrow,
You will not live to see tomorrow."

Wow, good rhyming and flow. Very deep.
This gave me the chills too when I read this, and your descriptions gave my mind such visuals. I got so into this poem, I was wanting more by the end. Take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever....