The ending of this poem is really sad. You really love him don't you? Anyway, there are some words in this poem that are spelled wrong.

You bring me down every (timw) we talk
= Time

The smirk in (you) lips tell me how cruel you are
= I think you meant 'your'

I think to enhance this poem you should try to use some punctuations in it.

Anyway, I'm sorry to hear that he's treating you badly... No one deserves that.

I think you should change this line. (It's somewhat confusing)
= i'm obsessed with you accepting me

It was a nice read. Keep it up.

Excellent work. A well written piece though so sad but a great depiction of a heart that is starving without love. 5/5 from me.

Oh sweetie, such a touching, heart felt poem, so much power in such a short piece, im so sorry you have been through this

If i want to put my emotions like you did , i would not be able to do that , as prefect as you expressed ,

soo yes, i will be stadning there till she break every piece of my heart!!

i am amized buy this poem even teh rhyming is not good , but i did not care that , since , it talked to me , very closly and describe my life too , as you see !!

you deserve a 5 from me blindly on this one!!

great work !!