This poem deserves a 5/5. It was amazing. The descriptions was direct. Everything from start to finish flowed well.

I really like how you end your poems. It's somewhat unexpected. Unpredictable = Great.

Beautiful white clouds
Let me sleep on you tonight
Help me see that life is not as scary as it seems
= I really like this stanza. I think it was a great idea to use 'clouds'

I always thought when I was a kid (what if we can touch the clouds)

Anyway keep up the good work.

Amazing poem. Simple and yet brilliant in the sense that you allowed so many images to flow thru this piece.
I like the repition - it just added a warm effect to the whole poem. And I also like the fact that you created this contrast between nature and oneself.
Amazing work that deserves nothing less than 5/5.

Yet another great visual. fantastic work 5/5