Comments : Losing you

  • Wonderful poem...i felt the sadness of the speaker leaving her love, but also the determination to not be brought down by the pain. The wording was siimple but with a lot of emotion.

    "Now the tables have turned
    and now it's your turn to learn
    that what you did was wrong
    and I've now grown strong"
    >this is my favorite stanza, it shows the pain and determination i mentioned earlier so well.
    and i a can relate to it too.

    Great poem!
    high 5 from me!!

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*