Comments : The sounds of nature

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "Gently the wind blows
    Tree branches sway to and fro
    Sounds of nature continually filling the air
    Blutterflies flying, fluttering, flapping their wings"

    Your word choice has entranced my mind here, and you really make me appreciate nature even more here.

    "Kookaburra's laughing in the tall trees
    Water dripping into the river from leaves
    All these echoing sounds
    The sounds of nature"

    Good ending, really gives the reader a visual, and this touched me. The sounds of nature is such a beautiful sound, and you captured that perfeclty. Well done, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...