Hey steph, great job on this poem!!! i loved the words u used, i thought u wrote it really well. these were my favourite lines:

"Undertaking all of my simple heartaches; I'm forever yours,
No matter the consequences, I swear I'm always your girl."

good job, 5/5.

Nice job! As for suggestions for the flow:

Some lines seemed a bit too rushed:
Undertaking all of my simple heartaches; I'm forever yours
and
Destiny has bestowed itself upon all of me and you, and -
Excitement is flowing through my rugged veins so freely,

Maybe adding some commas could relax it a bit, give the reader time to breathe. Also, instead of 'consequences', maybe change it to consequence. Even the slightest change like that can loosen it up a bit.

But nice job, the details and word choice were quite good!

Chin up, Eleni

This poem reflects strong feelings of love in one stanza, well, that's the acrostic strucutre...
I liked the words you used, they weren't high, but reflected the exact meaning you wanted it to.
The structure is well built, just a shame the rhymes aren't shown all over the piece. Rhyming usually makes the poem flow better.

Overall, nice poem 5/5