Jeannie
Your talent just shines in the words you pen. What a heart breaking write. Great imagery and word choices. So much lonliness and sadness captured within this piec.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Hauntingly sad...but so true .I love the rhythm and flow that is always present in your poems.

Feeble thoughts break from the mist
Dark days of loss turn paper thin
A silent scream on hungry lips
Break from the mind of 'might have beens'
^^^
Jennie this part grabs me hard .....

Sadness drizzles through the lines, and leaves the reader in deep thought for some time after.

Congrats on the win Jeannie ... well deserved !

A silent scream on hungry lips....l
I love the irony...good job and congrats! =D

Wow, this is such a heartfelt and sad piece you wrote here, and there is so much sadness pouring out of the poem, that really hits the reader.

"Feeble thoughts break from the mist
Dark days of loss turn paper thin
A silent scream on hungry lips
Break from the mind of 'might have beens'"

Good rhyming and word choice, you wrote this so well, and this was such a true work of art to read. Every line was so emotion-filled and your words captured my heart. Take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever....

Jeannie....Congrats on the win :)
Love Cindy

RTVW ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!

Wow. Your words hit me right in the heart. Superb job. I voted by the way. Take Care.

Wonderful piece of poetry very beautiful 5.5 keep up the work= ]