Ok hun... i don't know if that's how you always spell "yooh", but please spell it right.. "You" would be the correct way.... it would make your poem a little easier to read.

this poem is a little cliche...and i like the emotion you wrote it with, but you could have been a little more detailed...
Also liked the way your poem flowed and clean and nice...

I give you a 4/5.
=)

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*