Comments : New Land

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Waht can i say !!!

    mmmm

    i can tell somthing to you , someone living in a bad place dont see where he is untill he get a better thing he will look back and see it

    sjut dont give up

  • 15 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Wow jenny jen.. wat power.. wat emotion.. wata kick ass poem. great job and keep ur chin up. 5/5
    <3 harlea

  • 15 years ago

    by XoXo

    Wow. this was amazing!!!
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Lacie

    Great poem, 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by -] Nobody [-

    I'd kinda like an explanation to this piece - I enjoy it but I got a few vibes from it - (1) moving on from a place or whatever that's not as good as you imagine it to be as a previous poster insinuated OR (2) I thought about Heaven and the Bible within Heaven - and last of all (3) about people always telling you to move on like after a bad relationship - because people think you should just quit when things go wrong instead of put the effort into making them work... and the end (yet I get closer to you) kinda made me think that you were becoming like everyone else... if (you) were the people you were talking about pushing and shoving ---- SEE HOW I FEEL!!!!! Please explain this :D I like it in general but curious and possibly slow ;)

    Thanks in advance!