Again, very sad poem. I think what you write about, and how you write, its in a way that alot of people are going to be able to relate. And thats a good thing. Nice work. keep it up.

Its so relateable
especially the "you don't no what you have until its gone"
Its such a beautiful and emotional piece.
well done and Keep it up

5/5

Hey Jazelle girly! Haven't been on in a while, read your profile sorry to say you lost your grandma :(

This is a very sad poem :( , I could just hear your voice recite it as i was reading it.

Congrats on all your awards and 30 poems OMG! That's sweet, and i saw you've been active in the forums.

Your really spreading your voice around the community!

Haha great sad poem
luv ya *smooches* jkjk :D

Aww. sadness. *tear*. keep up the good work. 6/5 ~KM~