A poem with a purpose (: Love the thoughts portrayed in this piece, and while I disagree with bits and pieces, I too have a great faith in God, and it is wonderful to see your heart towards him. The flow was bit rocky, but overall it was nicely done. Keep it up,

*Nova

You started off good, the flow was pretty good, and then it turned kind of mushy and I had no idea where you were taking me.. the flow got pretty rocky in the middle and the end. You had a few grammatical issues, but in other words.. I thought that you expressed your self very well here, and I know some people feel the same like you.. they feel as though they have no purpose in life and they don't make people happy. Truly an understandable write.. but, I have to give you a 4/5 because the grammatical errors were just too obvious, and the flow was rocky at some points.

Ok, first, some spelling/ grammar:
Almost like I'm worthless cuz
who do I make happy (((Should there be a question mark here or a semi colon?)))
I see no smiling faces

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All I can do is tell God everything
He already know (((Should there be an 's' here?)))
Which is where I've been

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Cuz cars, clothes and martial things (((Idk if martial is the word you want to you. you may want to chekc on the definition which can be done at http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/martial))))

but other than that, i really liked this- even better than the last one youw rote. again, there was a bit of slang, but it does not disrupt the poem, it makes sense and im thinking it's your style.

great job.
keep writing.

I like how you have the element of god in your work. I beleave that he is there through all over out tough times. Also the rythm and meater in this poem is frequently used as well as constant and that in itself is a big part of your style. Although you can alaways change things up. Keep writing and good luck on your future poems

I'm sure we all ask that question itleast once in our life, what a great way to end the poem with the great lord, you're an amazing poet :]

keep it up!

5/5