I thought that the flow was shakey in places and their were a few spelling mistakes, but all that aside I though it was a very interesting read. I think everybody battles there mind at one time or another....Just one of those battles you have to win on your own. Excellent job though and very unique...5/5 GG23

The only thing i do not like in this poem is the ending it seemed a little rushed not so creative.

in the begining the were a couple of spelling mistakes i beleive. but in there was sense of insanity that was worth reading. for your charecter to accept that fasat the he lost his mind and then to turn around and label his insanity for the purpose of nothing but evil like he so sure of himself. well it was trully what made that one of the most perfect parts to the poem great work.

-Raindrops 5/5