Comments : You hit me.

  • 11 years ago

    by HvN

    Aww.. so sad but beautifully written!

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Omgosh. i really like this. it is so easy to relate to. 5/5 ~KM~

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessie

    It was really good, flows really well... might have had more impact if the last line rhymed but stil had that meaning

  • 11 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Why did you say, "I love you,"
    ^^ such a typical question : / it is sad that so many girls have to ask it!

    If you never really cared...
    ^^ guys always claim they did

    Why did you say you'd be there,
    ^^ such a desperate thought : / it is never fun to wonder this

    Only to leave me standing here...
    ^^ it always hurts to know someone could treat yo ulike that

    Why did you say you were sorry,
    ^^ i have asked it and never gotten a straight up answer! it is so frustrating!

    When it wasn't an accident...
    ^^ ah deliberate action...thats just cruel

    Why did you promise to protect me...
    ^^ so many guys say they will and end up hurting you more than anyone else would have

    -Honey, why did you hit me?
    ^^ : // no! thats so wrong! guys should not hit girls for any reason....i have been hit and you never forget it..

    very good poem short but sweet and to the point
    5/5