Hey There,
I'm not sure if this is a song or a poem but either way you have written this piece very well. I love the way you have penned it there is something about it, it's really unique they way you have laid it all out caught my attention the most.

Time travels faster than cars on the street
The people you know and the places you'll meet
You need to shout it out loud for it all to be heard
Take a bow for the sound and rise up for the world

I seriously just LOVE that part of this poem/song. I'm not sure what the meaning of this song actually is but I have a rough idea...if that makes sense. This piece made me in a sense feel....Umm how do I say this...it made my spirits rise for some odd reason haha. It made me feel good about myself as though to say "yeah don't worry everyone goes through this sh*t" This poem/song makes others feel good about themselves :) that's the main reason for why I enjoyed this poem/song
Mucho love
xxxxxx

Nice to see a Dylan fan. As you said you've written most of your poems with the music so this poem also seems like lyric. The whole write very good. Thoughtful and inspiring. Very nice.

Really good. The imagery in the poem was really good and the flow and the rhyme right along with it. The emotion in it was really good too. Well another good write. Keep on writing. Good job.

Stunning, inspirational piece that I loved.

You need to shout it out loud for it all to be heard
Take a bow for the sound and rise up for the world
^^
Love these lines. Well done.
Em