I Had It Once

by OrGaNiC   Oct 14, 2008


I had it once
your love, i had it
I lost it once
your love, i lost it
you used me
you loved me
you tried me
you were shy
you backed up
you messed up
you left me to dry
i saw this
i backed up
i worried
i cried
i messed up
i miss you
come back to me
tonight
i had it once
your love, i had it
i lost it once
your love, i lost it

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  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Welcome to PnQ

    Nice flowing poem.

    I found that reading other people's poems helped me try different styles.

    This style is okay, but you'll see so many others on here.

    Take care.