Comments : I Thought

  • 11 years ago

    by HvN

    Well i'll be there for you the whole way, we'll make it through together :]

    great poem!, sorry again for your lost.

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Liz

    I loved it. i smiled in the beginning, but then you turned it all around. it hurts when you think that just maybe they still think about you, only to find out they've moved right along without you.
    you're strong. i know you'll soon be able to let it go. slowly but surely.

    love ya!
    -liz

  • 11 years ago

    by Nee

    Dora love, this is just so amazing.
    although very heartbreaking..made me feel good at first, but then the "fooling myself" scene's started all over again.
    actually I was shocked reading that Harry's got a new girlfriend already...that's so...I dunno if I'm allowed to say "reckless"

    I love the twist in your poem, and I feel terrible about whats happening to you, Dora if you need anything just talk to me, I'll definitely listen to every word you say
    *hugsss tight*

    Write on <333

  • 11 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Well-done.

  • 11 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Amazing poem, you really know how to put your feelings in words... keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    I TOTALLY FEEL YOU DORA YOU TOOK THE WORDS OUT OF MY MOUTH I WAS IN A RELATIONSHIP AND WE BROKE UP AND I JUST WANTED TO ERASE EVERYTHING TO BUT SOMETHIN TOLD ME NOT TO I GUESS LOOKIN AT THE POEMS MAKE ME STRONGER BUT I FEEL THIS POEM THE MOST BECAUSE I LISTEN TO THINGS HE SAID HE MADE ME CRY...I COULD GO ON FOR DAYS!!!BUT KEEP IT UP YOUR A GOOD WRITER!

  • 11 years ago

    by Exostosis

    I thought too.........and my thoughts say ur an awesome poet..u rhyme cool..and put feelings in the words........and its alot hard 2 move on and get over the guilt feelings....alot true....5/5 obvious^^

  • 11 years ago

    by Tamon G

    Nice work. I can feel the emotion in every word, and can especially can relate too...

    "But every sleepless night I miss u in every way."

    The thoughts and connstantly can cause so much sleepless nights. Again, great work, keep up the good work.

  • 11 years ago

    by Gem

    Oh dora no.. it's been too long since i've read your poetry and after being so used to such love filled words, to come back to a broken heart is horrible

    "I thought I was lost but now I'm found
    I turned a new page without u around"

    This cut me to the quick

    I hope you're ok

    5/5 as always m'dear
    Gem

  • 10 years ago

    by Em

    It's always hard when the person we like/love no longer feels the same for us or never did but it's always nice to know they are happy even if we aren't. Well written, 5/5. Em