I loved it. i smiled in the beginning, but then you turned it all around. it hurts when you think that just maybe they still think about you, only to find out they've moved right along without you.
you're strong. i know you'll soon be able to let it go. slowly but surely.
Dora love, this is just so amazing.
although very heartbreaking..made me feel good at first, but then the "fooling myself" scene's started all over again.
actually I was shocked reading that Harry's got a new girlfriend already...that's so...I dunno if I'm allowed to say "reckless"
I love the twist in your poem, and I feel terrible about whats happening to you, Dora if you need anything just talk to me, I'll definitely listen to every word you say
I TOTALLY FEEL YOU DORA YOU TOOK THE WORDS OUT OF MY MOUTH I WAS IN A RELATIONSHIP AND WE BROKE UP AND I JUST WANTED TO ERASE EVERYTHING TO BUT SOMETHIN TOLD ME NOT TO I GUESS LOOKIN AT THE POEMS MAKE ME STRONGER BUT I FEEL THIS POEM THE MOST BECAUSE I LISTEN TO THINGS HE SAID HE MADE ME CRY...I COULD GO ON FOR DAYS!!!BUT KEEP IT UP YOUR A GOOD WRITER!
I thought too.........and my thoughts say ur an awesome poet..u rhyme cool..and put feelings in the words........and its alot hard 2 move on and get over the guilt feelings....alot true....5/5 obvious^^