This poem is great, good descriptions...however this piece is very sad... :'( ... 5/5

Wow! this was a very deep and emotional poem! i like it alot! 5/5 no doubt

This is really good. Course I am biased. I write a lot like you...love poems and well, the style is pretty much the same. Keep up the good work.

A very lovely start and a saddedning end. A real story of what love can do to people. It's such a wonderful yet deadening feeling.
Very well written, 5/5. Em x

Again, i love your writing. this is so meaningful and also very helpful to me right now!!!