Comments : My Promised Land

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A wonderful piece filled with such passion, of returning to your promised land, to a family who happily awaits you. Great descriptions and wording used in your poem, which certainly brought it alive! 5/5 from me, take care and keep writing, always and forever...

    God Bless You And Your Whole Family!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 15 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thank you for your kind words. I have been waiting for months to move back to my home town near Boston, Massachusetts. My deep longing to return plus memories of the place inspired this poem.