Awww well done im sure your husbened will appreciate your poem is was lovley.

These are my favorite lines from your poem:

Our togetherness were not a love accident
We were created for each other, we'd committed forever

So Laurent my love,
You were sent to me like a dove
Straight from heaven above
Thank you for your love.

To many times we fail to thank the one we love for their love.

Awww tts is so sweet...it would be great if after i got married, my wife were to write for me this...ur husband is 1 hell of a lucky guy to have u;)

How very sweet Kelleyana:)

Show it to him, I bet he will be so very flattered!
I loved the whole poem, you show so much dedication to your man:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Your poems always suprise me...you have sense of writting such honest, strong and straight forward poems. these poems do the job more efficiently, they transfer your feelings just like that

well done

Wow! Romantic and true love what i can see.. I like it very much.. 5/5
regards,
Shokry

That was so sweet and romantic. I am happy to know love like this really exists! 5/5

Very good i like it alot the kind of love you speak about is rare its a good thing you found it. Very good poem

Nicely Penned!!! Love is such a Beautiful thing.

This is a beautiful poem.
its great to see a love that is real and a great poem to express that.
whilst most poems i have read tell a story of broken love or betrayal, yours is quite the opposite, which is part of what makes it great.
keep up the awesome work.
xx

A beautifully etched poem... The love for your husband flows through this very poem. Now I get it, this is your forte. This is the best love poem ever dedicated by someone to someone. Awesome way to making it simpler but deeper.

Aww.. this is very beautiful and sweet. poored your corazin in this. cuz i could feel ur feeling ur emotion in this wonderful piece of urs. i love it. Keep it up!

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy