This is such a wonderful poem. the metaphors you used where amazing and unique.

"Break me.
Hate me.
Then make me whole.
You're no Romeo,
and I'm not longer this perfect Juliet"
>>this is just perfect. very few words but they get the point accross i like how you used Romeo and Juliet to describe the broken or tragic side of a relationship.

Over all Great job!!

**Ada**
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