A sad poem indeed i still remember my ex dumping me, nice work it was filled with emotions.

Aww laisve

this poem is so touching...what made me really like it that it has no ryhme but honest and straight words from the heart.

the ending was wonderful:
"Only on my mind I'm still with you.
Only on my mind I'm still touchhing you.
Only in my dreams..I kiss you"

great job laisve

It needs some work on the grammer, i also understand the part about no rhyming but she needs to work on the flow a little bit. it was to me like bits and peices of information that was scrambled to try and create a coherent piece. But i saw the emotion and it was raw and understandable throughout piece. in other words it was a decent write in terms of showing what she felt but all she needs to do know is put into a sense of flow.
- Raindrops 4/5

This reminds me of my ex when we broke up. Great emotion and sadness in this piece. loved it.

Again, the emotion is very strong. I usually enjoy reading more structured pieces, as it was hard to stay focused. There were a few grammar mistakes, but no big deal. Anyway, the poem it self was very meaningful and heartfelt. To me that's what makes a poem a poem.

Wooow!! 5/5 definitely!!
This poem has no rhymes but it is one of the best that I have read! I caould actually feel the feelings that you are writing about.. WoooooW! is all i have to say!=)