I liked this poem. It showed a sort of sad side, but also a good side. It was like two faces in one.

If I could steal your sorrow with a kiss
And turn weeping shadows into bliss

Favorite part of the entire poem. That was very descriptive, and I felt it was an amazing line.

Like birds flying into the pouring rain
I wish I knew how to erase pain

I'm not sure what that line is about, the birds flying through pouring rain...I think it means to try and dodge the pain as if it were rain. I'm not entirely sure though.

The poem was really good, Very good ending. The entire poem was good, I enjoyed it and felt that it was one of your better poems.

5/5

I likeI liked this poem. It showed a sort of sad side, but also a good side. It was like two faces in one.

If I could steal your sorrow with a kiss
And turn weeping shadows into bliss

Favorite part of the entire poem. That was very descriptive, and I felt it was an amazing line.

Like birds flying into the pouring rain
I wish I knew how to erase pain

I'm not sure what that line is about, the birds flying through pouring rain...I think it means to try and dodge the pain as if it were rain. I'm not entirely sure though.

The poem was really good, Very good ending. The entire poem was good, I enjoyed it and felt that it was one of your better poems.

5/5d this poem. It showed a sort of sad side, but also a good side. It was like two faces in one.

If I could steal your sorrow with a kiss
And turn weeping shadows into bliss

Favorite part of the entire poem. That was very descriptive, and I felt it was an amazing line.

Like birds flying into the pouring rain
I wish I knew how to erase pain

I'm not sure what that line is about, the birds flying through pouring rain...I think it means to try and dodge the pain as if it were rain. I'm not entirely sure though.

The poem was really good, Very good ending. The entire poem was good, I enjoyed it and felt that it was one of your better poems.

5/5

I could feel the sincerity in this poem but i wish you added more detail however thats just my opinion, nice write^^

This is so beautiful ..with flow imagery excellent meter and rhyme I could go on and on and still not do it justice

fantastic!

5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Powerful words, speak the truth, and you speak it well.

Wow, amazing.
"And turn weeping shadows into bliss"
That line was beautiful. This is such an emotional poem. The narrator is just trying to take away the pain of the person he or she loves. That is so beautiful.