Well Im not guna lie, I loved this poem. It feels like there could be more added to it though... But thatz just my opinion. Lol. 4/5

Perfectly suicidal, a fish of poisen that tastes scrumptious 5/5

A very descriptive writing of the pain in which you deal, praying for salvation to allow the soul to heal.
Nicely done. 5/5

This is really gud