Absolutely love it!! reminds me of my and mines <3 5/5 keep it up!!

[chris&caro]

A sad tragedy that runs through most peoples lives, i liked relating to it, nice work.

This piece is really relateable yet I think it contains an intimacy that holds so much more than the words you wrote. I think that it flows quite well and I like the structure too. Somehow this poem is both good and sad, which is not that easy to bring up both within one poem.