Well Sylvia i just don't think this will do at all, though your writing skills are excellent as always, i think your subject matter might need a rethink.
Now tell me what kind of cowboy gets his butt kicked by his horses? And he's had the same foot broken twice by horses, you'd think he learned the first time? Man and dance, well i'm not so sure about that what with the one foot being way bigger than the other from being stood on. Now if you were to write about a biker/cowboy of steel horses now that would be something special.HAHA
A lovely poem about a lvely young man, one i consider to be a son.
Well done

Grant

And dance a Texas Two Step where cowboys rule.
As can you see, he's nobodies country fool.

That is the best line in the entire poem. I enjoyed that and felt that you ended it just when it should have been ended.

Very well done. I enjoyed the poem very much so.

Wow Silvia , A fantastic Poem to A well deserving Friend...5/5...Jim

Hey!

A dedication to TJ! How nice!
I love that boy:)
Really sweet and so fitting to our cowboy friend!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid
ps: If you made any more dedications to mutual friends, please pm them to me!