Comments : Dishonesty

  • 15 years ago

    by Steven Topaz

    Wow this is your first poem in awhile and i liked it, its so true how dishonesty is used because people are lazy and when honesty just takes about one minute longer and saves pain both ways. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Wonderfully written. THe words you have used just brings out the full picture. I especially liked this part:

    Gambling with an organ
    it may tempt the shifty eyes
    control each subtle grasp
    become the one you most despise

    Well done! Take care.

  • 15 years ago

    by Justin

    Great job sis

  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Amazing job! im speechless! :)

  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Amazing job! im speechless! :) 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I think you've got great wording, and not only that, I think you structure your lines and stanza wonderfully.

    Brad

    P.S. I'm glad you liked my poem 'The Mermaid', and that you liked it so much you added it to your favorites. Is it still there? Tell the truth, lol.

  • 14 years ago

    by Luke

    Very nice very nice.

  • 14 years ago

    by ruth

    I really liked it :)

  • 13 years ago

    by ruth

    I like the last line.... " A cure within grasp, if you could stop before you start" it kinda gave me the chills lol. Keep up the good work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Dave

    I think its pretty dam good