Wow this is your first poem in awhile and i liked it, its so true how dishonesty is used because people are lazy and when honesty just takes about one minute longer and saves pain both ways. 5/5

Wonderfully written. THe words you have used just brings out the full picture. I especially liked this part:

Gambling with an organ
it may tempt the shifty eyes
control each subtle grasp
become the one you most despise

Well done! Take care.

Great job sis

Amazing job! im speechless! :)

Amazing job! im speechless! :) 5/5

I think you've got great wording, and not only that, I think you structure your lines and stanza wonderfully.

Brad

P.S. I'm glad you liked my poem 'The Mermaid', and that you liked it so much you added it to your favorites. Is it still there? Tell the truth, lol.

Very nice very nice.

I really liked it :)

I like the last line.... " A cure within grasp, if you could stop before you start" it kinda gave me the chills lol. Keep up the good work!

I think its pretty dam good