Very clever indeed, written well as always. 5/5, Em

I liked it! you threw in the word cigarette, and had me read the whole thing again!! Memorable! and, being a smoker myself, it's absolutely true! 5/5!

I really liked your poem...i didnt know what it was about either until you said cigarette, then it all made since. but newqyz great writed, i really enjoyed reading it
5/5