Comments : 5 Minutes and a Piece of Paper

  • I like the way you didn't hold back on this piece...
    and as always i love the way you think...

    "Erratic heartbeat
    Freezing hands
    Foreign lands
    Shifting sands"
    >>>i don't think this part connects with the whole poem...i really like the meaning and every thing but the poem can flow a lot better without it.. anyway other than that i give you a 5/5 keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is cool. It is creative and slightly random. I like it as it is, despite the fact some pieces may not fit in the entire puzzle, that just makes it even cooler. Anyway awesome job from me.

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Yes, so creative and free
    I loved the simplicity of this amidst the complexness of it

    and it was awesome

    love
    Tara
    xxx