Lovely poem Kelleyana your hubby is surely a lucky guy, when i read love poems written to husbands i always wish my wife wrote poetry.LOL
Well done

Grant

"Even pushing me to behave in a reckless way
Being a human- being, I do behaves in mysterious way"
`So Ill be completely honest with you and tell you that your first line was fabulous, second was great.. got to the third and made an awkward stop. Mainly because, you used way in the second and third lines .. right next to eachother and It kinda hurt the flow for me. :/

Overall, cute write.. expresses feelings real well.. Umm, I though the flow was a bit awkward.. but maybe thats just me.. I think the third line just totally threw it off and never really got back on track cause the poem was short.

But I thought this expressed your feelings clearly.
Soo good job. :] 4/5.

I really liked this poem. it was very sweet and your husband is very lucky to have you.
I loved your opening lines.
well done.
5/5

Very Nice Write!!!

Im speechless this poem was amazing

* Woow beautiful, amazing, deep,excellent poem 5/5

So beautiful. =)
It is such a lovely poem I read it more than once, and more than twice.. =)
Very well done. Loved it!
Keep it up.
5/5
xox