Comments : Fireplace

  • Wow...very interesting and your diction was flawless... i like the way you started this piece of art... only the truth was spoken. i like the twist you have for each stanza.... it connected the whole poem perfectly....although only those who have thoughts like yours will really understand this complex, yet beautiful piece...over all it was amazing and i enjoyed reading it.
    5/5 from me yo deserve it!

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    WOW!! i love it! its so powerful!

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. It was one of those poems that just draw people in. Very nice wording. I gave this poem a 5/5. Howevver the format was not my favorite.

  • 15 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    I've always been half and half on poetry that doesnt ryme. you have to have the best words to pull it off, and i really think you did just that. so i still enoyed this.

  • 15 years ago

    by El

    Interesting piece
    the wording was good

    i am like silent suicide i prefer poetry that rhymes i find it more... powerful?

    but this is gd i liked it